Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Thesis for Essay #1

Whether it is by a male, a female, or just society as a whole, women are constantly being judged and looked at.

1 comment:

  1. Sacha, it seems you're agreeing with Tannen's argument - which is fine, obviously, but I think in your thesis you should make it a little clearer that you're writing a response to her essay. Also, make sure that in your paper you're not just agreeing with her but also EXTENDING her argument.

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